Comments on: The Place Where Absolution Is Kept http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/2010/01/the-place-where-absolution-is-kept/ Sun, 18 Jul 2010 00:33:28 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.2.1 By: inanedetails http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/2010/01/the-place-where-absolution-is-kept/comment-page-1/#comment-174 inanedetails Wed, 13 Jan 2010 09:47:44 +0000 http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/?p=629#comment-174 Daly, didn't realize that was you, though I guess I should have. Hey! That's one less story you have to read for the book now. I'm gonna try and add a little more to it tonight, should have the update on googledocs by tomorrow. And I still need to get out to Boise, dammit! Maybe after your term, when you'll have time to get sauced. Daly, didn’t realize that was you, though I guess I should have. Hey! That’s one less story you have to read for the book now. I’m gonna try and add a little more to it tonight, should have the update on googledocs by tomorrow. And I still need to get out to Boise, dammit! Maybe after your term, when you’ll have time to get sauced.

]]> By: inanedetails http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/2010/01/the-place-where-absolution-is-kept/comment-page-1/#comment-172 inanedetails Wed, 13 Jan 2010 07:30:32 +0000 http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/?p=629#comment-172 Yeah, I am hoping that through the editing process I'll be able to add a couple graphs. Spoiler: This is actually the first version of a detective story I'm working on called 12 Rounds and Down. The detective's name is Danticat Balantine and the story is much more complex than this little sampling. But there IS a section that directly resembles this passage. At any rate, thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I am hoping that through the editing process I’ll be able to add a couple graphs. Spoiler: This is actually the first version of a detective story I’m working on called 12 Rounds and Down. The detective’s name is Danticat Balantine and the story is much more complex than this little sampling. But there IS a section that directly resembles this passage.

At any rate, thanks for the feedback!

]]> By: salvadore http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/2010/01/the-place-where-absolution-is-kept/comment-page-1/#comment-171 salvadore Wed, 13 Jan 2010 06:50:15 +0000 http://loathemegacorp.com/lmc/?p=629#comment-171 I like this a lot. It jumped into the bit where "...bitter pangs of anger explode...until his whole body writhed with rage." a bit suddenly, without the thick description the intro paragraphs had, I thought. I was glad that the gun doesn't go off, yet perhaps, but that might have been too much too soon. Is there more for Mr. Larister and his new friend? I'm hoping so... I like this a lot.
It jumped into the bit where “…bitter pangs of anger explode…until his whole body writhed with rage.” a bit suddenly, without the thick description the intro paragraphs had, I thought. I was glad that the gun doesn’t go off, yet perhaps, but that might have been too much too soon.
Is there more for Mr. Larister and his new friend?
I’m hoping so…

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